Name of the Team - Writers' Den
Chapter 1 : Mens Rea
Chapter 2 : A Morning Star
Chapter 3 : The Cursed One
Chapter 4 : The Vanquished
Chapter 5 : The Insurmountable
Chapter 6 : The Vulnerables
Chapter 7 : Her Last Voice
Chapter 8 : Survival of the Fittest
Chapter 1 : Mens Rea
Chapter 2 : A Morning Star
Chapter 3 : The Cursed One
Chapter 4 : The Vanquished
Chapter 5 : The Insurmountable
Chapter 6 : The Vulnerables
Chapter 7 : Her Last Voice
Chapter 8 : Survival of the Fittest
The
police had rushed to the crime scene. The body of the little girl - Sophia lay in a pool of blood. The police had a hard time in guarding the
crime scene and keeping the onlookers away. The police manual
required that a panchnama was drawn up immediately. The purpose of
preparing the panchnama is to describe the crime scene in detail and
collect material pieces of evidence, if any, found from the spot of the crime. The rules require that the panchnama drawn by the police must
be signed by two respectable members of the society. Independent members as panchas served as a check against false implication of an innocent person by the police.
However, experience showed that no respectable members of the society
were interested in signing the panchama. Why? They didn't want to be
troubled by being summoned as a witness in the Courts. Their only
achievement was criticizing the state of affairs of the country while
sipping their morning cup of tea while skimming through the
newspapers. The police had to obey the rule of law. So the general
practice is that the police have their own punters or habitual
panchas. No matter whether there is a theft of your footwear or
contraband goods are seized, the same panchas will sign the
panchnama.
So
the police had prepared the panchnama. The inside truth was that
police hardly drew panchnama at the spot. They just wrote it sitting
in their chowkis and made the panchas sign it. However, this being
rape and murder of a minor child, was a high profile case. So the
police had no option but to make it to the spot. A heavy built
officer in his late forties with tobacco stained teeth and with a
unique name Duryodhan Desle was heading the investigations. Duryodhan
sat at a nearby shanty which doubled up as a tea stall as his subordinates were completing the formalities.
Duryodhan was enjoying his smoke and sipping tea in between.
He was
disturbed by a constable. “What brings you here?” reprimanded
Duryodhan. “Sir there is a man with a unique request.” said
the subordinate standing upright. “ You son of a whore, whether
your mouth is stuffed with …. that you can not tell me who he is?”
roared Duryodhan. “Sir I have not asked him his name. I just came
to inform you at the earliest. He wants to sign the panchnama as a
panch.” Duryodan was intrigued. In his entire career spread over
almost three decades, he had never come across a person who had
volunteered to be a panch. In fact people had to be coaxed and at
times even threatened to sign it. He lifted his heavy frame and
walked to the spot. “What is your name?” he asked the young lad.
“Cyrus” said the young man while adjusting his specs.
***
It
was not that Cyrus had shared everything with JJ. They were just
using each other, trying to extract the information from the other.
Cyrus had deliberately been to the scene of crime. He knew how
shabbily the investigations were being conducted. He had heard his
father, when he was high, saying that he attributed all his success
to the poorly conducted investigations. Cyrus knew that the investigating
agencies of our country were poorly manned, ill-equipped and lacked
the necessary training. There was no other way that he could have got
an opportunity to see the things first hand. Luckily Duryodhan had
agreed to make him a panch.
Cyrus
displayed on his study table his prized possessions - three precious
pieces of evidence which he had collected from the spot. He had seen
there was thorn in the child's leg. He had managed to secretly pick
it up while the constables were busy doing their mundane duties. He
had also found a blank piece of paper in the channel near the rail tracks where the body
of Sophia was found. The paper was totally blank with nothing written
over it. But his inner instinct had made him pick it up. Thirdly
Cyrus had seen that there was a toffee placed into Sophia's mouth. It
appeared that it was put into her mouth after killing her. It was
impossible for him to take it out. But he had picked up the wrapper
of the toffee from a little distance.
Preening
at these pieces of evidence, Cyrus wondered if these pieces of jigsaw
would make the picture complete or were these the tricks of a
hardened criminal to waylay the investigating machinery.
“Res
ipsa loquitur.” He said aloud. The Latin maxim meant let the thing
speak for itself.
The
restlessness had kept him awake till midnight. He felt that the
things which he had cleverly collected from the spot of incident, were shouting out to him. They
had something to say. But he was unable to comprehend. His reasoned
brain told him that all this was bullshit and such things happen only
in novels. The conflict between his mind and brain created the
stress. Finally sometime in the midnight, his head became heavy and his eyes closed
involuntarily and he slipped into sleep.
His
sleep was broken by loud thumps on the door. The thud on the door
showed no signs of stopping. That made Cyrus get up from his bed.
Rubbing his eyes he walked to the door and opened the door. It was
still dark outside. “You are arrested Mr. Cyrus,” said Duryodhan
as he handcuffed him.
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I am reading this for the third time and think, this Duryodhan character will take this story forward. Nice move there, Mahesh! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rohini. You always have those kind words for me.
ReplyDeleteI liked the details of the crime scene and the investigation process that you have shared, Mahesh! Aah... this cliffhanger! Cant wait to know why Cyrus was arrested!! Great going, Mahesh :)
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