In September 2014 blogadda conducted a game of blogs. Five characters and their descriptions were given to bloggers who were divided into thirty teams. The teams were to weave stories around the given characters. Six degrees is a compilation of the three winning stories. The stories -the awakening, entangled lives and missing- a journey within all belong to different genres and are unique.
I
liked the awakening for its brilliant use of characters. All the
characters get equal footage. The characters are well etched. The
connection between the characters is well established. When it comes
to utilization of the characters provided, this story stands out. The
suspense builds up right from the first chapter. The story keeps you
hooked. However towards the end it lands into Dan Brown’s territory
and becomes a little insipid.
The
second story entangled lives is a murder mystery. The maid servant at
Dutta’s house is killed. By a strange stroke of coincidence all the
characters land up at the Dutta residence at the time of murder. As a
result all of them are suspected murderers. How the cop finds out the
real culprit is an interesting tale to read. The story changes tones
in many chapters. That affects the reading experience adversely. For
example the cop Java has all his soliloquies in English. But in
chapter 29, he suddenly speaks to himself in Marathi, that too
incorrect Marathi. However the end of the story is absolutely
brilliant. It is something different and unexpected.
We
have read about the aliens and we have read murder mysteries. But
missing- a journey within is really a different story. The story
moves back and forward. However this appears to be unintended. The
flash backs should have been gelled well. The story of missing Roohi,
after a few chapters becomes the story of missing Cyrus. Some raw
ends like about which Roohi was Dr. Phadnis talking about, why Cyrus
wrote mission Roohi on a card are the things which are left to the
reader’s imagination. Unfortunately no any clues are given for
guessing the same. I would have loved if the writers had elaborated
it. But still this story of a gay man is something different.
All
the three stories are riveting reads. Once you lay your hands upon
them, you will not put down the book until you have finished the
story. But the book is poorly edited, which mars the reading
experience. Line spacing between many words is missing. Apostrophe is
typed as > instead of ‘. Even in conversations and is
typed as &. I wish these mistakes could have been avoided.
Yet I loved the book.
The
publishers say that the readers will have to work out as to why the
book is named six degrees. Though the blurb says that the teams were
provided with five characters, when you count Aryan there are six
characters common in all the stories. I guess it is because of these
six characters which are common to all the stories, the book is named
six degrees.
Thank you for the candid review Mahesh. Really glad you enjoyed the story (minus the climax). I love to read honest reviews as I believe it helps you improvise.
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Dear Anmol and the team members of By lines thanks for stopping and commenting. Keep up the good work.
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I loved the book too!
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